In this Song Feedback Session, Bess and Allie work 1-on-1 with four TOTB songwriters, Courtney, Alli, Tom, and Amina, giving revision suggestions for editing an original song. 

Some elements covered in this session include:
Vulnerability
Song form
Vocal harmony
Metaphor
Trimming sections
Groove
Chord substitutions
Climax of a song

TIMESTAMPS:
Welcome: 00:00
Courtney's song: 02:00
Courtney's feedback: 05:10
Alli's song: 16:25
Alli's feedback: 20:15
Tom's song: 30:28
Tom's feedback: 38:35
Amina's song: 48:10
Amina's feedback: 51:32

Coming up in TOTB 
(our supportive, diverse membership of songwriters)...

- Our monthly Block Busters Challenge May 11-18
- Block Busters Listening Party May 19
- Song Feedback Session with Bess & Allie (open to all) May 15
- Sprint 3-day Challenge May 27-29
- Write with Us (open to all) June 8

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